On laber weekend I went to the mall at silver park whit my family and we all got 50$ to spend and my sister went but I had to go whit my mum and dad. So then I went and I went past a lot of shop's then I went to a shop but all the jeans were to big their was noting for me. Then I went to what for my sister's to came.
When they came I was going to go to look at more shop's but to late we were going I was sad but my dad it going to get me something that made me happy. Then when we were going home my mum give me 10$ to go and get me some food and I when fast when I got their the line was so enormousness. I buy'd me a lamb burger it made me fool.
Hey James I like your story I don't get half of it. I think you have to check your spellings you have lots of mistakes and you $ sign should be like $10 not like 10$.but still it was an amazing story.
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Mohammed