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Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Cookie

My mouth was watering when we were talking about the chocolate chip cookie.
When I ate the cookie it was crisp and crunchy .
My chocolate cookie tasted so nice that I was in haven.
We can tastes the specks of sugar on our biscuit.
The chocolate freckles tastes so nice that the chocolate
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5 comments:

  1. Room 15 Pt England SchoolMarch 7, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    You have a grate story of the cookie its good information.

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  2. LukisMarch 14, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    Hi James I like your story about your cookie I like the way you said that your mouth was watering your making me want it. Nice words you used you realy suprised me.

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  3. antonioMarch 14, 2011 at 2:18 PM

    hi James
    what cool writing how come you didn't save me one cool writing was it yummy!

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  4. EvanMarch 22, 2011 at 2:40 PM

    Hi James you had a cool story do you like it from Evan.

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  5. Jayden PMay 26, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    Hi James great story those cookies sounds very taste I wish I could have one.I like those words crisp and crunchy.

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